Grammar
1) some cheerful atmosphere
2) much warm air
3) a lot of ugly men
4) a few of dirty erasers
5) a lot of stinky smell
6) some sweet coffee
7) some trash
8) some yellow leaves
9) some fresh air
10) some green dress
11) a dirty trash can
12) some cold wind
13) three wood chairs
Paragragh #7
Yu Ra Choi
9/29/09
ESLA1984
Paragraph#7
First Job
First job give people to be nervous, to be interested and to be tired. I also had the first job, when I graduated from high school. It was sever in big restaurant, my working was taking order, cleaning the restaurant, severing food and changing the buffet place’s food, cleaning a table and dry many forks or knives. I had worked for almost one year, so I used to server food with skill of taking many dishes and cleaning. When I worked in there at first time, I couldn’t take many dishes on one hand, so I just took two dishes each of my hands. After two months I was used to taking dishes. However, I couldn’t dry many forks or knives because if I do this, I have to dry quickly, but I wasn’t used to this. It was very hard to me….
First Job
First job give people to be nervous, to be interested and to be tired. I also had the first job, when I graduated from high school. It was sever in big restaurant, my working was taking order, cleaning the restaurant, severing food and changing the buffet place’s food, cleaning a table and dry many forks or knives. I had worked for almost one year, so I used to server food with skill of taking many dishes and cleaning. When I worked in there at first time, I couldn’t take many dishes on one hand, so I just took two dishes each of my hands. After two months I was used to taking dishes. However, I couldn’t dry many forks or knives because if I do this, I have to dry quickly, but I wasn’t used to this. It was very hard to me….
First Job
First job give people to be nervous, to be interested and to be tired. I also had the first job, when I graduated from high school. It was sever in big restaurant, my working was taking order, cleaning the restaurant, severing food and changing the buffet place’s food, cleaning a table and dry many forks or knives. I had worked for almost one year, so I used to server food with skill of taking many dishes and cleaning. When I worked in there at first time, I couldn’t take many dishes on one hand, so I just took two dishes each of my hands. After two months I was used to taking dishes. However, I couldn’t dry many forks or knives because if I do this, I have to dry quickly, but I wasn’t used to this. It was very hard to me….
Paragragh #7
Yu Ra Choi
9/29/09
ESLA1984
Paragraph#7
First Job
First job give people to be nervous, to be interested and to be tired. I also had the first job, when I graduated from high school. It was sever in big restaurant, my working was taking order, cleaning the restaurant, severing food and changing the buffet place’s food, cleaning a table and dry many forks or knives. I had worked for almost one year, so I used to server food with skill of taking many dishes and cleaning. When I worked in there at first time, I couldn’t take many dishes on one hand, so I just took two dishes each of my hands. After two months I was used to taking dishes. However, I couldn’t dry many forks or knives because if I do this, I have to dry quickly, but I wasn’t used to this. It was very hard to me….
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Yu RA Choi
9/22/09
ESLA 1984
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Hard Doing
Many people want to become someone who admires themselves, a famous person, teacher, but I admire and respect my parents, I really love them because they are a model which I want to become for two reasons. First, they are enthusiasm for their job. I think that there are too many jobs which are good income or not in social case, and they have a job that is famer, not good income, not easy, not part time, so they usually spent time in fame during a day. I was a child, I hate that, because I want to the parent who go company, earn same income, not hard working, but I help to work for my parents, I knew that my parents
study Log#2
Study Log #2
* First Thing
In this week , I can check my basic Englich skill whith test , when I took test , I easily think about the question, so I got the low score …:( ,so I had check the my skill and scan to make grammar.
*second Thing
when I tried to teach my classmates , I precticed to speack English with grammar although this class is reading & writting class. I can surly speak front of crowd. I usually can’t speack English front of many people, so the tome was valueale time just to me !
Reading Journal #2
Yura Choi
ESLA1984
Reading Journal #2
09/18/09
http://www.newsforyouonline.com/story.asp?ID=139
Wich Do You Want
The article “Govenment and Citisens Debate National health Care” (Newforyou 09/02/09), explan that Obama prepare to do health care for everybody, so the Government has some metting with citisens. they has some problems about current system of health care in the U.S.A that is broken. I agree that Obama’s plan ,but although, it is better than now system for poorly people, I don’t agree just about abortion . I don’t understand why he want to take care to abort. it remove any baby’s life, and is murder. Anyway I agree bout haelth care just except abortion. I also rede about sadly story that there are people who want to see doctor ,wait in line for care , take care themself. this situation is too bad to me. all of people have to take care of everything, but all doctors who help poor people want to be basic, so I think that the national health care will fast affect for all people who want to take care from thier health care don’t have a job or some money.. If the Government took care its citizense , they coould refind their health and then work hard everythig ,and the cuntury was develop of economy.
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Money
Some people believe that money can buy happiness. I disagree the people’s thinking because of two reasons. First, although money can’t buy people, but it can’t buy their emotion. Sometimes any people get married with rich pople without love because of money. They also think that money can make me to do everything, but their remain life will be unhappy because they live with money , not their family or husband, so they always feel to be alone. Forexampl, when I stayed in korea , I usually watched a TV programe of korea that is ‘love and war’. It always conment that one couple has some problem after getting married . Therefore, there are many situation that a person got married rich person because og money will always be bad or have argument because they didn’t like each other, so if one person mistake or have some fault, they can’t forgive anything without love, and one person got married with money , always see and maneger the money, so they can’t be happy. Secondly, we can find happiness in other part of our life. People are happy because of many things ,so we are happy or sad or angry during one days therefore, we can’t know that there are many thing wich effect our to dicide happiness or sadness. Even though there are some people who believe that money can buy hapiness, there are more things which decide to be happy than money. Mony cant effect that people are happy or sad. I think that money can buy happiness
Ha Ha :)
I was taken this picture when I went camping with my friends on summer vacation. we have some sing a song time that was fantastic ! because there are moon nad stars on dark sky , some windy ,having camping fire ! it was interesting !!!! 
love it!!!**
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Let’s Travel Alone
Nowdays, there are many people who travel to any country with their friend or family. However, I think that to travel alone is better because there are 2 reasons. First, I can save time during travel. When I was in Korea, I wanted to travel to ‘Hong Kong’ for highschool graduation with my two friends, but they didn’t agree because one friend wanted to travel to one city of Korea, and another friend wanted to visit in Japan. Therefore, we had to spend to time for planning our travel. If I traveled alone, I wouldn’t spend time and I would go there easily. Secondly, I can easily everywhere easily during travel. Before I came here, I visited Seoul of Korea with my best friend. We usually think about each other case, so when we visited a museum, we stayed there during long time because I considered that my friend didn’t finish looking around in a museum, also I did. If I visited there alone, when I finished looking at everything, I could easily move and look to another place. Therefore, I think that to travel alone is better than another case because you move to other places and save time about planning to travel.
Study Log #1
During this week, there are something that improve me for learning English.
I think that i colud check my English basic skills, so if i didn’t know surely those I could study and correctly check grammars for learning higher skill than I learned English skills in ‘ B ‘Level class !
Even though I passed last level class, I could know that i have to study hard than other students , but it is not easy…
I’m very confused anymore……………..:( so I can’t keep to take class , so I want teacher’s help……..:(
